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This is maybe the 10th Lora Leigh Breeds book I've read. If you've read one Breed book, you've read them all. The Mating Heat dilemma is so overdone. The best part of this book is the cover.
Navarro's Promise needed a better editor. The plot is weak. The dialog is so corny at times even for a romance story that I cringed. If you were to give me three or four samples of dialog from various books, I could pick out the one written by Lora Leigh. She just has a distinctive way of phrasing things and I don't mean that in a complimentary way either. I read this book because for some reason I can't seem to wean myself off the Breeds books. Lora Leigh needs to spend more time developing the storyline in a book. She also needs to develop the storylines that were introduced in other books. There's so much potential in the Breeds stories, but she seems to be phoning in her books. Yet, I still read them. I'm still waiting for Cassie's story so this was a good starting point for that tale. If you like Breed books, you'll want to read this. If you haven't read a Breeds book before this isn't the story to read first.
Navarro's Promise needed a better editor. The plot is weak. The dialog is so corny at times even for a romance story that I cringed. If you were to give me three or four samples of dialog from various books, I could pick out the one written by Lora Leigh. She just has a distinctive way of phrasing things and I don't mean that in a complimentary way either. I read this book because for some reason I can't seem to wean myself off the Breeds books. Lora Leigh needs to spend more time developing the storyline in a book. She also needs to develop the storylines that were introduced in other books. There's so much potential in the Breeds stories, but she seems to be phoning in her books. Yet, I still read them. I'm still waiting for Cassie's story so this was a good starting point for that tale. If you like Breed books, you'll want to read this. If you haven't read a Breeds book before this isn't the story to read first.
