By: Elizabeth B. (meowysmiles) - + 29 more
Date Submitted: 6/8/2007
Last Updated: 6/10/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 44
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Love is built over time.
There is no secret door.
It goes deep in the soul.
Feeling each fiber of one's self.
To feel true loss without another.
The emptiness of time built.
Such love only true hearts can know.
It feels like dying to lose.
To know it is to live.

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Gina S. (GigiBeanz) - 6/8/2007 12:00 PM ET

This was nicely worded. Emotional and deep. Provokes self discovery beyond the flesh.

IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 6/8/2007 7:27 PM ET

If only young people today understood this.

Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 6/11/2007 7:05 AM ET

Beautiful!!!

Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/15/2007 5:57 PM ET

wow.. beautiful

Mary Kay G. - 6/18/2007 1:31 PM ET

HEARTFELT

Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/25/2007 5:22 AM ET

Very emotional I liked this

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