The Eclectic Pen - Crystal Wonderland

By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady) + 85 more
Date Submitted: 1/15/2007
Last Updated: 4/6/2007
Genre: Children's Books » Ages 4-8
Words: 66
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One morning I awoke to find
The fairies came and left behind
a sight to me which was so grand
a crystal covered wonderland

The sun was shining high above
It kissed the trees below with love
as tiny rainbows came to dance
upon each icy covered branch

I knew the magic could not last
because the ice was melting fast
I thanked the fairies for the chance
to see their world, if just a glance

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Dena (Suzie) C. (DsuzieC) - 1/16/2007 5:21 PM ET

Very beautiful, I can just picture it, even from here in warm Florida :)

Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/17/2007 1:59 AM ET

Great imagry. Change "know" to "knew."

Barbara F. (26hats) - 2/5/2007 8:04 PM ET

It is in the low single digits here today. Those fairies left a panorama on my sons' window this morning. It, too was beautiful. I will read your poem to them.

Lynn B. (seraphina) - 3/22/2007 12:16 AM ET

ahh new england winter days beautiful and cold and the sun always shines the next day. wonderful poem.

Silvercat - - 6/9/2007 2:38 AM ET

You write beautifully! What a pleasure to resd your "pennings"...

Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/27/2007 6:36 AM ET

nice to read on a hot summer day like today

Kim F. - , - 4/2/2010 8:08 PM ET

Beautiful poem. Good work.

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