The Eclectic Pen - Laughodills

By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady) + 85 more
Date Submitted: 1/10/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 58
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The sky was grey and it was dreary
I was feeling pretty weary
of the winter much too long
when I heard a birds sweet song

Looking for the little fellow
I came upon a patch of yellow
ladies laughing at the snow
in an early spring time show

Lovely laughing dafodills
chased away my winter chills
Filled my heart with springs delight
They were such a welcome sight

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BARBARA D. (TINKER) - 1/10/2007 9:49 PM ET

LOVED IT AND YES IT MADE ME SMILE.

Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/11/2007 1:05 AM ET

Another winner, Ione.

Damaris C. (Erinyes) - 1/11/2007 2:54 PM ET

Very good!

Carmela M. - 1/11/2007 9:30 PM ET

Nice poem. I like the play on word --laughodils--

Diane B. (wilddesertrose) - 1/12/2007 2:24 AM ET

That was fun :) Thanks for sharing. Diane B.

Silvercat - - 6/9/2007 2:33 AM ET

I loved this one! Seems to me you have shown some of us what we really already know, and forget...when you are down, get out and mingle with the world! Thanks!

Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/27/2007 6:32 AM ET

had to read twice I thought you ment the yellow was birdy pee lol glad to see it was a flower

Brenda O. (brendabreweroliver) - 6/10/2008 5:59 AM ET

Thank you for this one, It was very uplifting to me.

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