Charlie M. (bookaddicted) - , reviewed on 5/10/2017 + 131 more book reviews

This book has several elements to it that shows there was potential to be a much better read than it turns out to be. But, the main character comes off as immature, impulsive and irritating. Her reasoning for "having to solve the crime" is weak...that ever since she was a little girl she had to know the answer to what she saw as a mystery. It would have been more acceptable to say that she was doing it to save her fledgling business. Most of the secondary characters are not fully fleshed out....especially her best friend/business partner.

It's the first in a series and I will try the second to see if the author improves on the failings but if not, I won't continue with the rest of them.

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