Helpful Score: 6
I have skipped almost the first 1/4 of this book because I am finding it so hard to read. The way this book is written, my imagination can't even seem to put any emotion into the parts the characters "speak". They seem so emotionless. Almost like robots.
The first 1/3 of the book consists of the heroine telling her first husband how much she loves him...over and over and over and over again.
Phrases are repeated constantly...it's like she needed some filler.
When the characters are speaking to each other, face to face, they repeatedly say the other persons name. Example: "Oh, Charlie, you look wonderful." "You don't expect me to dance, do you, Ellen?" "No, Charlie, I know you don't like to." Who talks like that? You're looking at the person. Why do you need to say their name?
Needless to say, I do not like this book...and I haven't even finished it.
The first 1/3 of the book consists of the heroine telling her first husband how much she loves him...over and over and over and over again.
Phrases are repeated constantly...it's like she needed some filler.
When the characters are speaking to each other, face to face, they repeatedly say the other persons name. Example: "Oh, Charlie, you look wonderful." "You don't expect me to dance, do you, Ellen?" "No, Charlie, I know you don't like to." Who talks like that? You're looking at the person. Why do you need to say their name?
Needless to say, I do not like this book...and I haven't even finished it.
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