I enjoyed the book, but it was lacking in character development and character consistency. Dana's character was a little unbelievable with her innocence. It went overboard even going so far as to make it appear as if she hadn't seen a naked man, touch a naked man or been touched by a man in any way while even being in college.
Mason's character was inconsistent too. He was suppose to be a dominant and unable to suppress those desires. Then comes along his stepsister Dana and he suppresses them.... It seems unlikely for a man like Mason to turn into a vanilla kind of man.
Even the ending seemed a little wrong. I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say that the switch in him just came off as a little wrong.
Still with all the issues I found in this book I still rather enjoyed this book....
Mason's character was inconsistent too. He was suppose to be a dominant and unable to suppress those desires. Then comes along his stepsister Dana and he suppresses them.... It seems unlikely for a man like Mason to turn into a vanilla kind of man.
Even the ending seemed a little wrong. I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say that the switch in him just came off as a little wrong.
Still with all the issues I found in this book I still rather enjoyed this book....
