Laura P. (hemmputnam) reviewed on + 1154 more book reviews
I loved the characters and concepts but couldn't stand how repetitive the writing was. Let's hope the author can find a tough editor before the next book comes out. Your readers read the scene where their eyes met underwater and got what an amazing connection they made. We do NOT need to be reminded of it in every subsequent chapter!
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