I read the first 80 pages and found some big holes in the character development. For example, the main character is "jilted" by her first love and when she finally runs into him after 12 years, we then learn her sister was married to the guy's brother. Umm, that seems like a weird coincidence. Are men at such a shortage? Some of the colloquialisms are not time appropriate, I thought, and the relationship between Duncan and Margaret was a bit too contrived. Not impressed.
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