Jo V. (jovan) reviewed on 6/13/2010 + 301 more book reviews

Helpful Score: 2

This is a light read. The characters are enjoyable, motivation changes are well done, and yet.... there were moments when I almost put the book down because the author was not paying attention. For example, fairly early on in the story, the hero and the heroine are running to avoid the rain. The author says that his lungs are burning and yet... they have a conversation while they're running. Uh, no. If your lungs are burning from exertion, you're not going to be talking. Things like this drive me crazy because they're so easy to avoid, so when an author doesn't avoid them (and their editors don't edit them) I'm not inclined to read anything more.

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