Sybil R. reviewed on 2/8/2014 + 29 more book reviews

I really enjoyed the first two books in this series so I was really looking forward to the release of this book. As far a the plot, characters, the story was good. I enjoy Maya's books very much and am a fan. That said, I really felt I had to push through in order to finish this book. My major problem with the book was the way the male characters, ALL male characters spoke in this book. Almost every time any of the men spoke, the sentence was missing prepositions. After a while, it really started to get on my nerves. I started adding, "I, you, me", to the sentences in my head just so I could finish. I get that these characters are dominate, but every word they speak doesn't need to be written as a command. It was really hard to get past. That said, the story is really good. I enjoyed catching up with the characters from books one and two. Someone else mentioned that they would have liked to have seen more development on the relationship with Ash's family and I agree. His family relationship did not end in a nice little bow. However there could possibly be a story about his sister so the family story could continue.

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