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Book Review of Amazon Ink (Amazon, Bk 1)

Amazon Ink (Amazon, Bk 1)
Amazon Ink (Amazon, Bk 1)
Author: Lori Devoti
Genre: Science Fiction & Fantasy
Book Type: Mass Market Paperback
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Helpful Score: 2


Mel has a lot on her mind. She's raising a teenage daughter, living in a renovated High School, has her mother and her grandmother living with her, and just got 2 dead girls left on her doorstep. Mel's not sure why this is happening. Sure, it could be because she's an Amazon priestess living away from the rest of her tribe whom she left after the death of her son, but it could be just a coincidence too...right?

Knowing that it is most definitely not a coincidence, Mel has to summon her courage to face the tribe she left behind. People seem to keep getting in her way however, particularly men. The first a very talented and sexy tattoo artist she just hired to work in her shop. Mel knows Peter is keeping some kind of secrets of his own, but Detective Reynolds is making it hard for her to concentrate on much as he's constantly poking his nose where it doesn't belong...and it's getting harder and harder to explain away the odd occurrences that happen in her house.

Determined to find the murder of her tribeswomen and get the answers to her own questions about her past answered at the same time, Mel sets out to face her demons.

I have to say I was not expecting much. The whole theme of "Amazon Ink" is set in Madison Wisconsin. No offense to the Badgers (I love Bucky!), but not the most exciting setting for a murder mystery mixed with Amazon warriors. I have to say though I was pleasantly surprised.

"Amazon Ink" really held my attention. I wasn't on the edge of my seat or anything, and I was pretty sure I knew who the culprit was the instant he was introduced as a character, but I still wanted to get to the end of the book and make sure my hunch had some merit. Overall "Amazon Ink" had likable characters. For me, that's a big up sell for any fantasy. I cared about the characters and wanted them to succeed. I did have some problems with the writing however, that I cannot in good conscience as a reviewer fail to put into writing.

On the good side, "Amazon Ink" is a quick read. Great for a public transit commuter like myself, a plane ride, or a beach read. Devoti's style reminds me a lot of Gena Showalter only...better. Showalter writes good stuff, but it's more romance chicklit stuff with some adventure thrown in. Devoti is more adventure with a touch of romance thrown in. For me at least, that made "Amazon Ink" more readable and saved me a lot of eye rolling.

On the flipside, Devoti is not the most riveting author out there. There were definite places where my eyes skipped over big sections, sometimes even whole pages in an effort to get back to the action, I really only need one, maybe two, paragraphs about a character's feelings in my opinion. I want their life story, but spread out throughout the book, not in one fell swoop.

There were also a couple of spots where I really wanted to throw something at Devoti's editor. Take this example on page 349: "Makis's face was pale, his arms and legs akimbo - unnatural." This use of the word "akimbo" is incorrect. The sentence makes it feel like the guy is sprawled on the ground with his limbs in strange directions but "akimbo" means: "with hand on hip and elbow bent outward: to stand with arms akimbo."[...], which means it's impossible for legs to be "akimbo."

Strangely all those episodes of "Top Model" and "Project Runway" paid off. Very strange. Anyway, although "Amazon Ink" won't be winning any awards, I liked it. It was fun, different, off the beaten path, and I will definitely read the next installment.

3 ½ stars.