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Book Review of A Veiled Deception (Vintage Magic, Bk 1)

A Veiled Deception (Vintage Magic, Bk 1)
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Helpful Score: 3


Had high hopes for this book, but I was disappointed. The exclamations used by the main character (a fashion designer's assistant and seamstress) were just too cutesy. Got really tired of "What the Hermes?" It simply felt unnatural. I'd wager if anyone really talked like this, people who had to listen to it would get very irritated after a while. Just too much of it.

The plot was kind of thin, the characters not fleshed out enough. Some of the sentences seemed disjointed; they lacked a good flow.

Not the worst book I've ever read, but I won't be getting the next book in this series.