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Book Review of His Forgotten Forever (Bewitching the Dark, Bk 3) (Silhouette Nocturne, No 44)

His Forgotten Forever (Bewitching the Dark, Bk 3) (Silhouette Nocturne, No 44)
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Though I enjoyed this book, the poor editing was very aggravating. The characters thoughts are all in quotes as if they are speaking to someone instead of in italics (or something). I kept having to stop and reread to see who the heck they were talking to. It was very annoying as it happened throughout the entire book. Also there are a ton of dropped words (in, the, on, and, or etc). Here's an example: "And a huge snowflake plonked between their close faces, landing his mouth."

Ms. Hauf did introduce a new concept in vampire lore. Witch blood instantly kills vampires. This makes the ware between vampires and witches rather interesting and deadly.