Katie (katiebug11) - , reviewed on 12/21/2013 + 12 more book reviews

I'm not finished reading this yet, and I'm sure it will get better because it got such great reviews, but I just had to start this review while my memory is still fresh on it. Its so annoying I can't stand it!! I'm on page 152, halfway through and I can't stand the way the author wrote these characters, especially since they had such good potential! Marnie is strong yet vulnerable and Jake is a rugged sexy man who's got his guard up after being betrayed. However, Marnie has spent the entire book up until now throwing herself at Jake making her look and sounds desperate. Had it been written better she would have been endearing. I also can't get over the wording the author is using. Marnie talks about her"boobs" and Jake references his"penis" when the scene and situation totally should have been breasts and cock. It sounds weird but if you had read it you'd understand. And pretty soon I'm going to start counting how many times Jake says "Judas!". Im going to update my review when I finish the book but like I said, I think it will have a great ending and it needs to be said that this book had the potential to be fantastic from start to finish.

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