Broke my fikfek (a word you'll learn in the book) heart, even if I did kind of see it coming.
Even so, I would have given it five stars if not for the overabundance of typos, some of which seemed to stem from the author's use of voice-to-text (example: "Dada" where, from context, I know she meant "data"). The publisher, Line by Lion, is essentially assisted self-publishing (I think); this story could have benefitted immensely from an actual editor, a good beta-reader, or even a careful final read-through by the author.
Even so, I would have given it five stars if not for the overabundance of typos, some of which seemed to stem from the author's use of voice-to-text (example: "Dada" where, from context, I know she meant "data"). The publisher, Line by Lion, is essentially assisted self-publishing (I think); this story could have benefitted immensely from an actual editor, a good beta-reader, or even a careful final read-through by the author.
