Ruth M. (hoopernurse) reviewed on + 2 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 3
I love explicit, crazy sex scenes HOWEVER I have two rules:
1) Men have ONE cock; thou shalt not invent two and an extra wtf appendage unless you want to really do a biology/anatomy info dump. IF you want double penetration in a scene make it a devil's threeway.
2.) If you use medical terms in your sex scene this porn reading nurse will switch from "that's hawt" to "Am I studying my proctology text?"
Way too mechanical and the author needs a better thesaurus. Some scenes sounded just...ugh...like nasty! Four letter words are great but don't you dare use 'vagina' in a sentence and expect it to sound sexy. Unimpressed (but I still read it...but would not have done so sober!)
1) Men have ONE cock; thou shalt not invent two and an extra wtf appendage unless you want to really do a biology/anatomy info dump. IF you want double penetration in a scene make it a devil's threeway.
2.) If you use medical terms in your sex scene this porn reading nurse will switch from "that's hawt" to "Am I studying my proctology text?"
Way too mechanical and the author needs a better thesaurus. Some scenes sounded just...ugh...like nasty! Four letter words are great but don't you dare use 'vagina' in a sentence and expect it to sound sexy. Unimpressed (but I still read it...but would not have done so sober!)
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