This story was definitely the best I'd read so far in the series. Yes, it still has an unpolished feel to the writing style, but it wasn't as annoying as the earlier ones with an overly-dramatized plot. This one actually had a story that was quite good and even included some emotional depth to the characters that I hadn't really felt in the earlier stories. Overall, a good read and I'm hoping the next in the series is as interesting.
