Carol S. -
Helpful Score: 2
I absolutely loved this story, and it was a wonderful way to spend an afternoon when I needed to sit around and wait for someone... and yet, wow, I cannot help but to have been negatively impacted by the huge number of grammatical errors in this book - I think the editor either did not get hired or simply gave up on this one... the errors all made me pause and wonder just what it was that Maya was trying to say... and the misuse of words like affect for effect... and mid-rift for midriff.... oh boy.... BUT... great story, very sweet!
