Ruth M. (hoopernurse) reviewed on 3/23/2010 + 2 more book reviews

Alright, some things were clever. Use of Valkeries/phantoms/vamps alright, however I'm not one for a series that has all creatures existing without any explaination. Also the book reached a point where it could have ended multiple times and then...kept going.

Other romance/erotica rules that were terminally broken:

1) Thou shalt not have a dead female lead who suddenly gains life, then dies then gains life again easily as can be
2.) Thou shalt not have a male lead with performance issues in a paranormal romance. VAMPIRES DON"T SHOOT EARLY! (unless they're vampire assassins taking after 'Fet...and then not in bed!)
3.) Thou shalt not top off on the mary sue drama meter on a bi page basis.

Ghost and crazy vamp fall in love story is cute...but the totally happy ending with random set of twins stick in on the end = fail.

Read it and want my three hours back but if you like mary sues or need something to read while stuck in the airport (or want a laugh; mentions of Mike Rowe did make me quirk a brow for a moment) then this is a good one for that.

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