Donna C. (g-ma) reviewed on 2/18/2018 + 3152 more book reviews

Oh where to begin---mainly I hated the writing

1. 500 pages? really? awful
2. about 25 pages into the book there is a graphic porn scene of sex with a stranger in a motel
3. main character is unlikable and most of the main characters are like that---unlikable
4. meanders all over the place with 'thoughts' 'emotions' that just takes up pages
5. main storyline gets lost in all the unnecessary garbage
6. foul language all the way through and I mean foul, really? do all cops talk like that? I doubt it

this needed a lot of editing to get it down to a tighter thriller but publishing it like this? just too much mud to trudge through for 500 pages!

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