Not a bad story but there were a few distracting grammatical errors, and I had a bit of trouble liking the Hero and heroine. He was a bit cold (aka an asshole) until the very last paragraphs, and she was a bit stupid (and a bit of a weakling - with barely any backbone- to boot) Though there were definitely some hot scenes in this that almost make up for the leading characters.
Also annoying is that you get the hero's pov at the start of the book, but afterward its mostly (if not all) from the heroine's perspective which isn't bad, but annoying. (If 99.9% of the story is from her point of view, why bother giving his at all?)
and the last bit of action (the violent kind) sort of just popped up outta nowhere. And everything was resolved in only a few pages!
Overall, not a bad read and I will give her another try (crossing my fingers that her newer ones are better), but if I'd read the print version of this, (as opposed to the ebook) this definitely wouldn't be a keeper.
Also annoying is that you get the hero's pov at the start of the book, but afterward its mostly (if not all) from the heroine's perspective which isn't bad, but annoying. (If 99.9% of the story is from her point of view, why bother giving his at all?)
and the last bit of action (the violent kind) sort of just popped up outta nowhere. And everything was resolved in only a few pages!
Overall, not a bad read and I will give her another try (crossing my fingers that her newer ones are better), but if I'd read the print version of this, (as opposed to the ebook) this definitely wouldn't be a keeper.
