Yvonne L. reviewed on + 929 more book reviews
The book started really well and 1/3 of the way through got really stupid. I started to hate Daria and Ryon. He would go back and forth between the sweetest guy in the world to the biggest jerk. Her character completely changed once they started an opt together. She became whiny and complained a lot. For someone who is supposed to be used to being out in the wild for days, she is sure obsessed with cleanliness.
On top of that some of the situations they were in were just really dumb. The transitions to the sex scenes were horrible. Hey if I was in the woods with an army of men tracking me and an invisible monster on the loose, I think getting naked and doing it repeatedly would be really low on my list. Both made horrible decisions in regards to the operations.
I skim read it to the end. Had a lot of potential but definitely poorly written.
On top of that some of the situations they were in were just really dumb. The transitions to the sex scenes were horrible. Hey if I was in the woods with an army of men tracking me and an invisible monster on the loose, I think getting naked and doing it repeatedly would be really low on my list. Both made horrible decisions in regards to the operations.
I skim read it to the end. Had a lot of potential but definitely poorly written.
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