Ani (goddessani) - reviewed on 6/11/2010 + 269 more book reviews

Helpful Score: 5

Not as emotionally gripping as The Tin Star, which moved me greatly. The main characters here, Gray and Shane, seemed to move about the pages like stick figures rather than flesh and blood characters.

Also, it reintroduced characters from the other book (Ethan and Jamie, John and McCabe) without explanation as to whom they were to each other or to Gray and Shane. So if you hadn't just read The Tin Star, it wouldn't make sense.

The sex scenes were graphic and titillating but without the emotional connection, it left me cold.

There were also a LOT of editing errors in this book. Words left out, words in the wrong place within a sentence, etc. Very shoddy.

Overall, not J.L. Langley's best which is a shame because Langley can write a great tale.

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