Don't like the writing format--back and forth POV and the timeline
It drags and drags and has too much description that isn't necessary (peeve of mine)
At the half point I was bored and didn't find any suspense/thrill to this story maybe it came later but I couldn't trudge through anymore
It drags and drags and has too much description that isn't necessary (peeve of mine)
At the half point I was bored and didn't find any suspense/thrill to this story maybe it came later but I couldn't trudge through anymore
