Erin S. (nantuckerin) reviewed Nightfall (Vampire Diaries: The Return, Bk 1) on + 158 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 3
I was a little uncertain upon picking up Nightfall, the first book in L.J. Smith's continuation of her wildly popular Vampire Diaries series aptly called The Vampire Diaries: The Return. I had enjoyed the first three volumes of the original series, but book four left me completely cold and, in my opinion, jumped the shark in tremendous fashion.
However, I'm a sucker for a bad boy in black, and had heard that this new series cast its focus on Damon Salvatore rather than his too-good-to-be-interesting brother Stefan. So, I gave it a try.
In the interest of full disclosure, I thought the first quarter of the book was just horrible. I almost put it down. But then the book took a pleasantly surprising turn. The result is a book that is probably better than all of the previous Vampire Diaries novels that came before it, and much scarier than anything else I've read by Smith.
Nightfall picks up about one week after the conclusion of Vampire Diaries book 4. Elena is a spirit newly returned to Earth after sacrificing herself to save Damon and Stefan. She's not a vampire, and not a human, either. What she is is a being charged with white magic, childlike, innocent and full of blood irresistably intoxicating and powerful to any vampire. Stefan and Elena have been reunited, and plan to make a new life together away from Fell's Church.
However, the rest of the Scooby gang is back, too, and the book quickly reverts back to the structure established in the fourth novel. Like that book, the action and plot drama in Nightfall reminded me quite a bit of an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer -- the "gang" all working together to solve a mystery threatening the town, with the help of a witch, a couple of vampires and a heroine recently back from the dead.
I will say, though, I thought Smith's "big bad" in this novel was unique and interesting, and Nightfall is full of some genuinely scary imagery and ideas. I loved the evolution of Damon throughout the novel, too. As a character, his journey of falling in love with Elena is so much more believable and genuine than the relationship between Stefan and Elena. Elena is a more interesting character, too -- she's come a long way from the self-centered and stuck-up girl we met in the first book. Smith also tries to further develop Bonnie, Elena's Celtic witch friend, but she continues to annoy me. She's one of those scream-and-faint girls that continue to pop up in horror novels. I keep waiting for her to have a defining moment that makes me like her -- maybe in the next book, Shadow Souls.
Overall, if you enjoyed Vampire Diaries, you should take a chance on this new series. It's a meaty 600+ pages, but is NOT an omnibus edition of several shorter books, just one long text. The book does leave readers with something of a cliffhanger ending, however, which I'm looking forward to sorting out when Shadow Souls comes out next month.
However, I'm a sucker for a bad boy in black, and had heard that this new series cast its focus on Damon Salvatore rather than his too-good-to-be-interesting brother Stefan. So, I gave it a try.
In the interest of full disclosure, I thought the first quarter of the book was just horrible. I almost put it down. But then the book took a pleasantly surprising turn. The result is a book that is probably better than all of the previous Vampire Diaries novels that came before it, and much scarier than anything else I've read by Smith.
Nightfall picks up about one week after the conclusion of Vampire Diaries book 4. Elena is a spirit newly returned to Earth after sacrificing herself to save Damon and Stefan. She's not a vampire, and not a human, either. What she is is a being charged with white magic, childlike, innocent and full of blood irresistably intoxicating and powerful to any vampire. Stefan and Elena have been reunited, and plan to make a new life together away from Fell's Church.
However, the rest of the Scooby gang is back, too, and the book quickly reverts back to the structure established in the fourth novel. Like that book, the action and plot drama in Nightfall reminded me quite a bit of an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer -- the "gang" all working together to solve a mystery threatening the town, with the help of a witch, a couple of vampires and a heroine recently back from the dead.
I will say, though, I thought Smith's "big bad" in this novel was unique and interesting, and Nightfall is full of some genuinely scary imagery and ideas. I loved the evolution of Damon throughout the novel, too. As a character, his journey of falling in love with Elena is so much more believable and genuine than the relationship between Stefan and Elena. Elena is a more interesting character, too -- she's come a long way from the self-centered and stuck-up girl we met in the first book. Smith also tries to further develop Bonnie, Elena's Celtic witch friend, but she continues to annoy me. She's one of those scream-and-faint girls that continue to pop up in horror novels. I keep waiting for her to have a defining moment that makes me like her -- maybe in the next book, Shadow Souls.
Overall, if you enjoyed Vampire Diaries, you should take a chance on this new series. It's a meaty 600+ pages, but is NOT an omnibus edition of several shorter books, just one long text. The book does leave readers with something of a cliffhanger ending, however, which I'm looking forward to sorting out when Shadow Souls comes out next month.
Helpful Score: 2
This book is horrible. I had to force myself to finish it.
At first, I thought it might have been fan fiction, written by an imposter. The continuity of the story bothered me to the point of distraction. The first four books had no mention of cell phones or computers and the internet because it wasn't a technology that was widely available in the nineties. Nightfall picks up a few days after the last book ended. But in reality, it's been about a decade. Overnight all of the characters have cell phones and are surfing the internet. And the diary in question? It is now a Word document.
The story is written in such painstaking detail, that I wonder if L.J. Smith was paid per word. There were details that could have been left out and the story should have been shorter. Nightfall is twice as long as all of the other books and if one were to count all of the words, I wouldn't be surprised to find if most of the book's bulk was nothing more than adjectives.
Nightfall has sort of "The Host" feel to it, complete with soul stealing parasites that make a "whip whip whip" sound like a helicopter. It's all about angelic Elena's transformation into a human again and the evil kitsune twins that feed off of emotion. But the twins come across as anime villains, with mystical powers and magical objects. There are no real vampire adventures and the moments that we do have with Damon and Elena or Elena and Stefan are so disjointed, it is hard to follow along.
Nightfall also has a strange sexual overtone to it that was absent in the previous books. Elena awakens as an innocent soul, who kisses people to greet them. Only, it is in a nonsexual way, except Elena is uncomfortable with Stefan seeing her kiss Matt...which means it's not purely innocent. But, I digress. The parasites make people do things they wouldn't normally do and at times it made for an uncomfortable reading.
I might still pay the $20.00 to download the next book on iTunes, but I am hesitant. Maybe I'll read the reviews first and then decide. This purchase stung a bit.
At first, I thought it might have been fan fiction, written by an imposter. The continuity of the story bothered me to the point of distraction. The first four books had no mention of cell phones or computers and the internet because it wasn't a technology that was widely available in the nineties. Nightfall picks up a few days after the last book ended. But in reality, it's been about a decade. Overnight all of the characters have cell phones and are surfing the internet. And the diary in question? It is now a Word document.
The story is written in such painstaking detail, that I wonder if L.J. Smith was paid per word. There were details that could have been left out and the story should have been shorter. Nightfall is twice as long as all of the other books and if one were to count all of the words, I wouldn't be surprised to find if most of the book's bulk was nothing more than adjectives.
Nightfall has sort of "The Host" feel to it, complete with soul stealing parasites that make a "whip whip whip" sound like a helicopter. It's all about angelic Elena's transformation into a human again and the evil kitsune twins that feed off of emotion. But the twins come across as anime villains, with mystical powers and magical objects. There are no real vampire adventures and the moments that we do have with Damon and Elena or Elena and Stefan are so disjointed, it is hard to follow along.
Nightfall also has a strange sexual overtone to it that was absent in the previous books. Elena awakens as an innocent soul, who kisses people to greet them. Only, it is in a nonsexual way, except Elena is uncomfortable with Stefan seeing her kiss Matt...which means it's not purely innocent. But, I digress. The parasites make people do things they wouldn't normally do and at times it made for an uncomfortable reading.
I might still pay the $20.00 to download the next book on iTunes, but I am hesitant. Maybe I'll read the reviews first and then decide. This purchase stung a bit.
Stacie P. (froot) -
Helpful Score: 2
GAK! Vomit! Yak!......Harper needs to fire the editor who handled this mess. After reading the first two in this series I was really looking forward to what was in store for these characters.
Elena Gilbert, now an angel earth bound in human form, must rise against 2 supernatural (or is it 3, I wasn't sure even after re-reading sections several times) forces terrorizing Fells Church for the sake of their own entertainment.
There is way too much bouncing back and forth in this book. I felt like i was reading an uncorrected ARC. This book could have easily been cut down to 350 pages and turned out to be a nice read. Instead I felt trapped like the characters in the Old Wood suffocating, wrapped in diabolical evil grammar.
586 pages later, a major disappointment.
Elena Gilbert, now an angel earth bound in human form, must rise against 2 supernatural (or is it 3, I wasn't sure even after re-reading sections several times) forces terrorizing Fells Church for the sake of their own entertainment.
There is way too much bouncing back and forth in this book. I felt like i was reading an uncorrected ARC. This book could have easily been cut down to 350 pages and turned out to be a nice read. Instead I felt trapped like the characters in the Old Wood suffocating, wrapped in diabolical evil grammar.
586 pages later, a major disappointment.
Stacie P. (froot) -
Helpful Score: 1
GAK! Vomit! Yak!......Harper needs to fire the editor who handled this mess. After reading the first two in this series I was really looking forward to what was in store for these characters.
Elena Gilbert, now an angel earth bound in human form, must rise against 2 supernatural (or is it 3, I wasn't sure even after re-reading sections several times) forces terrorizing Fells Church for the sake of their own entertainment.
There is way too much bouncing back and forth in this book. I felt like i was reading an uncorrected ARC. This book could have easily been cut down to 350 pages and turned out to be a nice read. Instead I felt trapped like the characters in the Old Wood suffocating, wrapped in diabolical evil grammar.
586 pages later, a major disappointment.
Elena Gilbert, now an angel earth bound in human form, must rise against 2 supernatural (or is it 3, I wasn't sure even after re-reading sections several times) forces terrorizing Fells Church for the sake of their own entertainment.
There is way too much bouncing back and forth in this book. I felt like i was reading an uncorrected ARC. This book could have easily been cut down to 350 pages and turned out to be a nice read. Instead I felt trapped like the characters in the Old Wood suffocating, wrapped in diabolical evil grammar.
586 pages later, a major disappointment.
Danielle M. (mommahalo) reviewed Nightfall (Vampire Diaries: The Return, Bk 1) on + 24 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 1
As a huge fan of the vampire diary books since I was 15 I was more than happy to get my hands on the newest books. It started out just like the others. A problem arouse and they had to go snooping to fix it. Even the newest enemies were intriguing. But it was the ending that I did not like. She became too powerful and the powers she possessed were more than just cheesy. I am interested to see what happens to Caroline but alas I find Caroline in the TV series to be more interesting. I was completely let down by the ending. But it was great up until then.
Allena W. (starknits) reviewed Nightfall (Vampire Diaries: The Return, Bk 1) on + 15 more book reviews
Helpful Score: 1
This book was horrible. It was written probably 10 years after the first set in the series and it's almost like it was fan fiction. it didn't seem to be along the same lines of the series almost like it was written for the TV series which is totally different than the books. I was soooo disappointed when i read it and mad that I spent money on it. Things were changed in this book and things were added suggesting that they happened in the previous books when they didn't. Over all I would skip reading this book.
This book was awful. I first discovered The Vampire Diaries through the TV show, and subsequently read all four original novels. While they couldn't be described as great literature, I enjoyed all of them and never expected them to be more than stories about vampires and young love, which is where the author should have left the series.
The Return: Nightfall is a huge departure from the original books, which were written two decades earlier. The original stories were - for a depiction of the supernatural - believable and relatable. This one takes a deep dive into the realm of the bizarre and dishes out nonstop over-the-top circles of frequently nonsensical action. The new villains are Japanese fox demons called kitsune, which behave like impish children and create evil for fun. They've possessed several people in Fells Church using bug-like creatures, and they periodically command trees to come alive and pursue humans.
Not all the weirdness comes at the hands of the kitsune, however. Elena is back from the spirit world but initially without the capabilities of speech or normal movement. At one point they lead her around at night, shining with a bright inner light and attached to a string like a balloon - that's right, they describe her as floating around like a glowing balloon. It borders on ridiculous. And oh yeah, she has wings.
I almost stopped reading after the first 50 pages or so, but plugged away until the end. The star and I half I rate this book is merited by the development of the Damon-Elena relationship, which I'd like to see explored in far more depth. Damon remains a fantastic character, though much of his presence in this book is marred by the influence of the kitsune. Stefan is largely absent.
I've removed the second two books of The Return trilogy from my wish list. According to other disappointed readers, all three are stinkers. I'll still look forward to Stefan's Diaries, however, as a fan of the show. The writing for those was taken over by the show writers and they go back to the original story rather than snaking through this bizarre thicket of eye-rolling action.
The Return: Nightfall is a huge departure from the original books, which were written two decades earlier. The original stories were - for a depiction of the supernatural - believable and relatable. This one takes a deep dive into the realm of the bizarre and dishes out nonstop over-the-top circles of frequently nonsensical action. The new villains are Japanese fox demons called kitsune, which behave like impish children and create evil for fun. They've possessed several people in Fells Church using bug-like creatures, and they periodically command trees to come alive and pursue humans.
Not all the weirdness comes at the hands of the kitsune, however. Elena is back from the spirit world but initially without the capabilities of speech or normal movement. At one point they lead her around at night, shining with a bright inner light and attached to a string like a balloon - that's right, they describe her as floating around like a glowing balloon. It borders on ridiculous. And oh yeah, she has wings.
I almost stopped reading after the first 50 pages or so, but plugged away until the end. The star and I half I rate this book is merited by the development of the Damon-Elena relationship, which I'd like to see explored in far more depth. Damon remains a fantastic character, though much of his presence in this book is marred by the influence of the kitsune. Stefan is largely absent.
I've removed the second two books of The Return trilogy from my wish list. According to other disappointed readers, all three are stinkers. I'll still look forward to Stefan's Diaries, however, as a fan of the show. The writing for those was taken over by the show writers and they go back to the original story rather than snaking through this bizarre thicket of eye-rolling action.
Danielle L. (DanielleFM) -
love the tv series the book is very different couldn't get into it as well
Not nearly as engaging as the original series. Though it seemed like there was plenty of action, the action never truly pulled me in; the whole thing felt dull.
Alaina H. (laina42107) reviewed Nightfall (Vampire Diaries: The Return, Bk 1) on + 115 more book reviews
I can't even write a decent review for this book. Don't waste your money. If you want to read it, borrow it. My one word explanation of this book - Horrible. BTW L.J. Smith please stop killing the character Elena. It's beyond Ridiculous at this point!
I was a huge fan of the Vampire Diaries series... until this book came out. I only ventured in about two chapters before all of the sickeningly sweet stuff drove me away. I couldn't read Stephan call Elena his "lovely love" one more dang time. It feels, to me, that L.J smith, under the sudden popularity of her series, was required to release this book. It is very unpolished and scattered. The thoughts are incomplete and it seems as though a young girl wrote this... not an accomplished writer.
I still am a fan of L.J.Smith, but this series is just....not that great. I like the TV show more. I hate to say that since I'm a huge book fan, but there is just not enough in the book for me to really like it. It's slow. You don't know how to feel about the characters. I had to force myself to continue to read it.
Jonathan H. (bigjohn84) reviewed Nightfall (Vampire Diaries: The Return, Bk 1) on + 36 more book reviews
good book
