Helpful Score: 1
~ HAD SOME VERY PROMISING ASPECTS, BUT AS A WHOLE IT WAS DEFINITELY LACKING (2.5 stars) ~
This was my first book by Carolyn Jewel and at the beginning I was very excited, because the story seemed very promising. I especially loved that our hero is not drop-dead gorgeous (far from it!), as almost every romance hero invariably is. Edward, Marquess of Foye, is definitely not one of those heroes - quite the opposite in fact: "With a face that defined 'ill made' and a body that tended to intimidate by sheer size - he had always been prone to muscle - Foye was used to women looking past him or away from him" (p8).
Throughout, Edward remained an enjoyable hero and I found him to be a very sweet and "nice-guy" type of leading man. He's intelligent and confident, but also sensitive and vulnerable. His feelings towards Sabine never waver and really come across to the reader. I also greatly enjoyed the first few interactions between the two of them. Unfortunately, after that it went downhill ...
I did not like the huge age difference, though if not mentioned all the time one can usually overlook those (she's 23 and he's 38).
I did not like that what usually takes an entire book to sort out happened by p89 - they've declared their feelings, are in love, want to marry when possible.
I did not like that Sabine is so standoffish - understandably, due to her past - with Foye, they then kiss in the 60s (pages), and then everything for her is turned around. Granted, she already starts to be nicer towards him once she discovers that he has good intentions and that he actually objected to what was said that ended up ruining her. Still, she did a very quick 180 there.
I did not like that Sabine was sometimes extremely overemotional and melodramatic. I also didn't like her constant dialogue with herself when she's having to wear her disguise as she and Foye travel, always telling herself she has to embody this role, this is what the person would do, she can't think of herself as Sabine, on and on and ON! Got to be very exasperating.
I did not like that the subplot overshadowed the romance for most of the mid-section of the book - and it wasn't a great one to begin with. It also ends COMPLETELY anti-climactically.
I did not like that there are about 5 different ending ploys. What I'm referring to are those events in romances that catapult us towards the HEA and that set everything right in the end - sometimes it's the hero or heroine almost dying, the murderer being caught, some big secret being revealed, a realization on his or her part that they love the other, etc. Well this book had about 5 of those until all I could think was Enough already!!!
I did not like that Sabine never EVER calls the hero Edward - the most familiar she gets with him is calling him Foye. One even wonders if she knows his first name, since she never even thinks it (refers to him as such in her mind) and I'm not sure they're introduced to one another with full names.
There were more things I didn't like, but I'll stop there.
I think what would have been best was if we had pages 1-66 stayed as they were, which is at the point where Sabine has started to let her guard down and Edward is really becoming entranced and attracted to her. Then the majority of the book could have been them developing an emotional and intellectual connection, without a mystery subplot - their characters were interesting enough to be able to carry the book by themselves, no need for another story thread. Their physical connection would also of course develop and then there could be pages 67-89, with the obstacles they face being both of them making the final leap and them getting her uncle's blessing. Voila, done, it's a wrap!
BOTTOM LINE:
Unfortunately, I cannot even say that I would recommend getting this from the library (which is thankfully what I did). The author does have the ability to write intriguing characters, great chemistry, and some good dialogue, so I will be giving her another chance and hope that her other books surpass this one.
This was my first book by Carolyn Jewel and at the beginning I was very excited, because the story seemed very promising. I especially loved that our hero is not drop-dead gorgeous (far from it!), as almost every romance hero invariably is. Edward, Marquess of Foye, is definitely not one of those heroes - quite the opposite in fact: "With a face that defined 'ill made' and a body that tended to intimidate by sheer size - he had always been prone to muscle - Foye was used to women looking past him or away from him" (p8).
Throughout, Edward remained an enjoyable hero and I found him to be a very sweet and "nice-guy" type of leading man. He's intelligent and confident, but also sensitive and vulnerable. His feelings towards Sabine never waver and really come across to the reader. I also greatly enjoyed the first few interactions between the two of them. Unfortunately, after that it went downhill ...
I did not like the huge age difference, though if not mentioned all the time one can usually overlook those (she's 23 and he's 38).
I did not like that what usually takes an entire book to sort out happened by p89 - they've declared their feelings, are in love, want to marry when possible.
I did not like that Sabine is so standoffish - understandably, due to her past - with Foye, they then kiss in the 60s (pages), and then everything for her is turned around. Granted, she already starts to be nicer towards him once she discovers that he has good intentions and that he actually objected to what was said that ended up ruining her. Still, she did a very quick 180 there.
I did not like that Sabine was sometimes extremely overemotional and melodramatic. I also didn't like her constant dialogue with herself when she's having to wear her disguise as she and Foye travel, always telling herself she has to embody this role, this is what the person would do, she can't think of herself as Sabine, on and on and ON! Got to be very exasperating.
I did not like that the subplot overshadowed the romance for most of the mid-section of the book - and it wasn't a great one to begin with. It also ends COMPLETELY anti-climactically.
I did not like that there are about 5 different ending ploys. What I'm referring to are those events in romances that catapult us towards the HEA and that set everything right in the end - sometimes it's the hero or heroine almost dying, the murderer being caught, some big secret being revealed, a realization on his or her part that they love the other, etc. Well this book had about 5 of those until all I could think was Enough already!!!
I did not like that Sabine never EVER calls the hero Edward - the most familiar she gets with him is calling him Foye. One even wonders if she knows his first name, since she never even thinks it (refers to him as such in her mind) and I'm not sure they're introduced to one another with full names.
There were more things I didn't like, but I'll stop there.
I think what would have been best was if we had pages 1-66 stayed as they were, which is at the point where Sabine has started to let her guard down and Edward is really becoming entranced and attracted to her. Then the majority of the book could have been them developing an emotional and intellectual connection, without a mystery subplot - their characters were interesting enough to be able to carry the book by themselves, no need for another story thread. Their physical connection would also of course develop and then there could be pages 67-89, with the obstacles they face being both of them making the final leap and them getting her uncle's blessing. Voila, done, it's a wrap!
BOTTOM LINE:
Unfortunately, I cannot even say that I would recommend getting this from the library (which is thankfully what I did). The author does have the ability to write intriguing characters, great chemistry, and some good dialogue, so I will be giving her another chance and hope that her other books surpass this one.
Helpful Score: 1
Story: 4 stars
Romance: 4 stars
Overall rating: 4 stars
A very sexy version of Beauty and the Beast--set in the middle-east. I enjoy reading about a very intelligent beauty who is appreciated by an equally intelligent hero. He fell in love with her brain, then had to save her life--in a very brave and heroic fashion.
I don't recall ever reading anything by this author before this one, but I will definitely see what's out there or what's coming...
Romance: 4 stars
Overall rating: 4 stars
A very sexy version of Beauty and the Beast--set in the middle-east. I enjoy reading about a very intelligent beauty who is appreciated by an equally intelligent hero. He fell in love with her brain, then had to save her life--in a very brave and heroic fashion.
I don't recall ever reading anything by this author before this one, but I will definitely see what's out there or what's coming...
I really, really loved this story. The setting, mainly in Turkey(or, as it was known then, the Ottoman Empire), was extremely original, and the author did a great job with the atmosphere and period details. The food, the clothes, the local politics, everything was well done and realistic. The hero and heroine were wonderful characters. Both have been burned once, twice shy, but feel an immediate interest and attraction to each other, although they don't act on it right away. Both are extremely intelligent, and they don't hide it. It's fun to see them dance around each other for a while. The age difference didn't bother me a bit, because this couple was so obviously meant for each other.
Once they get out of the city and into the desert, the pace really picks up, with the heroine getting kidnapped and the hero rescuing her. Even though I was expecting an HEA, I was on the edge of my seat, worried about how they would get away. It was exciting, there was lots of local color, and I couldn't stop reading. Towards the end there is another bit of heartbreak, but luckily it gets resolved quickly.
If you enjoy a historical Middle Eastern setting and a story with a lot of adventure, I can also recommend "A Secret in Her Kiss" by Anna Randol, "The Other Guy's Bride" by Connie Brockway or "Mr. Impossible" by Loretta Chase. The last two are much lighter and funnier books. But Jewel did an amazing job with "Indiscreet" and deserves to be in company with those great authors. It was a great find for me, and I plan to look for more by this author.
Once they get out of the city and into the desert, the pace really picks up, with the heroine getting kidnapped and the hero rescuing her. Even though I was expecting an HEA, I was on the edge of my seat, worried about how they would get away. It was exciting, there was lots of local color, and I couldn't stop reading. Towards the end there is another bit of heartbreak, but luckily it gets resolved quickly.
If you enjoy a historical Middle Eastern setting and a story with a lot of adventure, I can also recommend "A Secret in Her Kiss" by Anna Randol, "The Other Guy's Bride" by Connie Brockway or "Mr. Impossible" by Loretta Chase. The last two are much lighter and funnier books. But Jewel did an amazing job with "Indiscreet" and deserves to be in company with those great authors. It was a great find for me, and I plan to look for more by this author.
I thought this was a great book which included a lot of adventure in the Middle East and an interesting and atypical love story. It begins in London where, after being falsely accused of a sexual liaison with the Earl of Crosshaven, Sabine and her uncle escape to explore new parts of the world, ending up in Turkey. The hero, the Marquess of Foye, crosses paths with them in Turkey where he tries to clear up with Sabine why her reputation was besmirched. He is privy to inside information, as well as having been present when the initial claims were made by a former friend of his (Crosshaven). She assumes any attempts for communication on his part are because he wants to make her his mistress since she is a "fallen" woman and therefore rejects any attempts to befriend her. Both characters are very intelligent, and this causes them to eventually develop respect for one another and a tentative friendship. Since her uncle is no longer freely welcomed as a leading scholar and intellect in London, he decides to take advantage of his travel experiences and write a book about their travels. Due to his age and poor health, he depends completely upon Sabine to aid him in this. Because of this, he agrees to visit a Pasha who shows an unhealthy (i.e., sexual) interest in Sabine and puts her at risk for abduction, etc. Foye tries to warn them, but it goes unheeded. The heart of the story comes in his attempt to rescue her. Their means of escape is clever and dangerous and creates interesting adventures where their relationship develops in a very nontraditional way since he spends more quality time with her disguised as a boy than as a woman. I thought they were an endearing couple, and I became very convinced of the depth of their love for one another, even tho they spend so much of the time questioning whether the other one really loves them or not. They each have past experiences and personal demons to overcome which is what causes them to question the sincerity of the other person's love.
