Giving it 4 stars because-----this is for the YA group of readers and I think they would like it more than I did.
Pros--it comes off being more for the YA group and has a good message in it, it has some Christian meaning to it and a good lesson about people in general
Cons--for me the writing was juvenile and that sets the tone, needed to be cut down about 100 pages and tighten up the story, has too much repeat over and over which to me was irritating, and it was draggy in places whence the need to cut down the pages.
Pros--it comes off being more for the YA group and has a good message in it, it has some Christian meaning to it and a good lesson about people in general
Cons--for me the writing was juvenile and that sets the tone, needed to be cut down about 100 pages and tighten up the story, has too much repeat over and over which to me was irritating, and it was draggy in places whence the need to cut down the pages.
