Well I certainly agree with Cathy on everything and I'll add another--
pages and pages of descriptions that just don't mean anything, for example, I don't live in LA so I don't know the area at all (and don't care) so all the mentions of street names and home areas was nothing but tedious and boring so I skipped a lot of pages on that stuff, then the descriptions of her cars, guns, clothes and on and on and on--tedious and nothing to help the story but--
like Cathy I kept reading to find out exactly what was going on with who was looking for her and how they knew about her being in that house
again, like Cathy, don't start with this book if you want to read this author just not a good way to start off
pages and pages of descriptions that just don't mean anything, for example, I don't live in LA so I don't know the area at all (and don't care) so all the mentions of street names and home areas was nothing but tedious and boring so I skipped a lot of pages on that stuff, then the descriptions of her cars, guns, clothes and on and on and on--tedious and nothing to help the story but--
like Cathy I kept reading to find out exactly what was going on with who was looking for her and how they knew about her being in that house
again, like Cathy, don't start with this book if you want to read this author just not a good way to start off
