Helpful Score: 7
This book is a fairly solid opening in what is obviously a series. The main characters are well drawn and the plot is intriguing. Unfortunately the author swamps those factors with an overload of useless (at this point in the series) information. There are too many extraneous characters and sub-plots splitting the reader's focus and drawing away from the main story.
The world and the characters have potential, but Chance needs to learn how to pare down her work so readers are pulled in, not drowned.
The world and the characters have potential, but Chance needs to learn how to pare down her work so readers are pulled in, not drowned.
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